Setting
It was summer time because Jerry was at the beach with his other.
Plot
It is a story about a young boy,his ame is Jerry..His mother was a widow and he was the only son. The story started of when his mother took him to the beach he did not want to go and he dissapeared whithout letting the mother know.So his mother decided to take him somewhere elseapart from a wild and rocky bay beach.Jerry was happy about it .Jerry met with 3 non-english speaking boys that were a bit older than him Jerry felt pain in his eyes and couldnt open them for long because of the salt water.Jerry demanded for googles and the mother bought for him.In conclussion Jerry was memorising his views,thinking about his previous action at the beach.
Description of the main character
Jerry was eleven years old .He was staying with his mother, he was the only son and his mother was a widow.Jerry was a good swimmer.He was a brave boy because, he was determined to do almost everything ,he swamm in the salt water without his mother.He was always dreaming about a water filled cave in the rock but, it happened . Although he was the only son he was always determined to achieve something unlike other kids born alone.
jah, it was not your day i think,but anyways you did your part
ReplyDeletei will arrange you at 7/10, well done
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